Generating funny-sounding writers
Either your words hit fast, or they don’t hit at all.
In this case, they didn’t –
They already know to negotiate. Teach them to save.
What’s wrong here?
Don’t like that the word “they” is used rather than “kids or “she” in direct reference to the object. Negotiate is in comic contrast to the tantrum on view, but it doesn’t properly balance the image, or the statement on “saving” that follows, as a more jocular phrase would.
Enter OneLook.com: a "reverse dictionary" that quacks like a thesaurus. It’s a database of words and associations.
Simple search with the word cheery. I toggle for “funny-sounding”.
Generate associated words.
(Try the Idea Map view, too.)
How do you improve lackluster marketing language? Let better ideas surprise you as your eyes cycle around.
A rabbit-hole here later and I patched together a new line for the piece —
Haggling came naturally. Saving starts on your say.